Your Little Echo

March 21, 2006 6:44 PM from

It may seem like I want to do everything
that you've ever done, it's true
that I sometimes wait
until the coast is clear
(no fear) that I'm just a shadow
a mimic
I go to rediculous lengths
to prove myself
separate
from
you.

I'm wrong to say you haven't had
an effect on me but
(see here) I'm more than just your
little echo.
I've got my own frame of mind.
Rewind the cry
of smothering love.
It's just Independent
me.

art

676 views 3 replies

Reply #1 March 21, 2006 10:14 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

This is great. Everyone feels like they are in someone else's shadow, and you've put that collective feeling quite nicely here.

Reply #2 March 22, 2006 12:22 AM from

JoeUser Forums Top

Excellent, Nicky, really excellent. I know I've felt like this in the past.

Reply #3 March 22, 2006 2:04 PM from

JoeUser Forums Top

I wonder who this is? A sister? A lover? Doesn't matter

it's so well done.

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