GeneralEtrius
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Okay, here's what you do for this game: You have to "ban" the person who posted above you for an outrageous, silly, or funny reason. Got it?
Banned for confusing an emotion with a versatile herb, or for not appreciating the Handsome Boys Modeling School.
Banned because I was typing about music, not some escort service or something. Dan the Automator is awesome. And the HBMS gives lots of good advice about personal hygiene and shit--it's all about respecting the ladies.
banned for R-E-S-P-E-C-T
Alpha, you didn't ruin shit. If the lore goes on long enough, Sere will be back, trust me.
Shh...
Banned because, unlike mine, that's a real spoiler (though not really if anybody else has been paying attention to the backstories of Teal's character).
banned for everyone... actually, I have no idea how many read through all of her stuff. I assume the majority.
banned for assumptions
I try but her writing style turns my mind in knots.
Banned because some of it is indeed mind-melting. I find that you just have to read the post in its entirety, then read it again, and it sort of all snaps into place. Very clever really.
banned for I can understand.
In some places, she just draws out thoughts in a way which extend and repeat very momentary ideas and that can make people feel very messed up given their usual mental timing.
She also has the same issues with grammar or sentence structure that everyone else does, but given the pacing of the writing, those flaws can trip you up more than average.
She's more a fan of poetry and that shows, but the current trend in writing is for prose. I've tried to find a middle ground between styles in my last post and one other in the past, but it is very different from the other lore writers. Some can stomach it; some can't.
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