Wow! I haven't gotten a chance to read it yet but thanks for coming back! I had assumed that you (like many others) had started a large project but just decided that it didn't hold your interest or something came up and you decided it just wasn't worth it. But... here you are with Chapter 5! Thank you!

Chapter 6 is done I hope you guys like it tell me what you think!

That was so quick I didn't even get a chance to read Chapter 5 before Chapter 6 came out! But now I have read both and I must say that the story is so much better than anything I could have made in a similar amount of time - I salute, you, givemesomepienow. I can't believe that you have written almost 100 pages of a "book" that will never earn you a penny! I feel like it is a gift to our relatively small community of loyal Sins players and I think that you deserve another karma.

Wait... I just looked at your karma and all of it so far has been given by me. And how do I have more karma than you when I haven't really done anything for the Sins community? Well, there was that whole collector's edition thing, but I really think that the folks at Stardock and Ironclad deserve the credit for that masterpiece of a collector's edition.

But you do deserve another bit of karma for coming back and making me feel like posting on these forums again. And for keeping your story varied and interesting. And now there are pirates! Will there be any pirate characters, I wonder? Perhaps some diplomacy between the TEC and the pirates or between the Vasari and the Advent?

And I found it funny how the Vasari take John away to fix him up but end up beating him up again.

Glad you're back (nice site too, wix is quite easy when it comes to making sites, or so I believe). I look forward to reading the new chapter when it's released.

It's lovely to read a book about your favorite game! And you done very good work, givemesomepienow! Bravo! Just this thing about the rebellion how it began on Advent and Vasari... 

I can try.

For me there is no really a different story how the Rebellion began on Advent and Vasari, it's just a copy 1by1 of the story of TEC. The Rebellion is something important and should be much much more then kiddish quarrels at the senate and few words. Let only TEC Rebellion begin from the senate, it's OK for them because people's governments are always full of intrigues, corruption and someone's interests. Advent Rebellion can begin as a feel of pain in the hearts of Advent followers, pain of the mass death of beloved sisters caused by the war. And because Advent followers are connected in mind each other, they feel everyone of them as a sister and love it truly. So with the strong power of Advent mind, they innovate the resurrection, but even as Advent is an UNITY, they split in two of should they resurrect or not, because it could be dangerous - lose of mind power(big damage reduction of Advent Rebels and culture weaken).   

Thanks for the feedback guys!