DrDonald

DrDonald

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FS - I must have missed this, sorry. How lovely and how full of feeling and expressiveness. I envy you your natural and credible dialogue. I really enjoyed it!

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Yeah, much like what has been said. The characters were personifying your ambivalence, your "tug of war" with yourself. Resolving ambivalence is often considered to be a stage of change. You chose life. (or it chose you ). As with me, I'm sure it's not the first time. </font

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my favourite part was but I know I’m closer to the dessert than the appetizer ...and I loved some of those signposts that were mine too. Definitely, Buddah, point me to dessert. It's my favorite part. What I like about your work is that it speaks to our commonality, but in an un

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some trucking company got tired of their drivers getting tickets for doing 1 or 2 mph over the limit through there and put them there to warn people. I guess you know, but some might not, we're pretty spoiled Canada-side. You've gotta be over 120 km/hr in a 100 km/hr zone before you get ticketed and the government even posts signs to advertise that fact. Good view as usual!

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I've never seen the Mississippi either. Saw that riverboat, cool. Apparently, the Red River tributary of the Mississippi reaches right into Canada and periodically floods parts of Winnipeg, Manitoba. Very relaxing clip. Thanks.

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A couple of "infinite" poems - authors unknown A graduate student at Trinity Computed the square of infinity. But it gave him the fidgets To put down the digits, So he dropped math and took up divinity. Pi vs e Pi goes on and on and on ... And e is just as cursed. I wonder: Which is larger When their digits are reversed? --night night. (you people are hilarious)

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Made me a bit giddy, like an IMax, especially on the zooms. Got a sense of the speed. At first I kinda thought the camera was strapped on your head, but then I was hoping it wasn't, cuz you wouldn't be looking at the road much. Fun ride!

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Interesting take on the theme, Don. I saw the repetition and framework as analogies for mundanity, normalacy while the slip between provides an escape, even from gender. Fascinating take, Maso. Yeah that mystery is in there somewhere in the infinities of story-within-the-story. The fourth wall is somewhere between the title and the page. The work reaches out one level up, by it's nature. Inspired thanks...and

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He picked up his pen and began to write this story: _____________________________________________________... | | He picked up his pen and began to write this story: | _____________________________________________________... | | | | He picked up his pen and began to write this story: | | ________________________________

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Well done. Seemed very natural Mason! Your voice had a heavier drawl than I imagined but otherwise pretty close to the relaxed confidence I've come to expect. See, I don't have any accent at all Boy there are a lot of dials to look at! The manifest was pretty much the miltary parts I'd heard you describe. What's next? Me vlogging an incision and d

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There is a stream-of-conciousness feel about this. I am inclined to agree with Chris about it being a little of both prose and poetry too. Now that you mention it, I see the stream. When I was writing, I guess I was in it, so I didn't sense it. I prefer this style, personally. I find it is easier for me to re-read. It also feels more like I've been to that place where things are born. Thanks.

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Good points all! agreed! It's nice to get the last word in, isn't it?

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Good example, Shovel. But then you could argue that if each "truly" loved the other person and were able to see the other person's needs, they would sacrifice that relationship. Yes, if that's what he means, I think I see Abe's point. Sacrifice in the name of love is not enough for a relationship to work. I do see some pretty miserable situations motivated by love, though. The love that parents have for a chronically sick or terminally sick children, for example. <img sr

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if it's love there is no sacrifice Interesting point of view, Abe. I hope you don't mind if I give you mine. For me, love is not just a feeling. Ideal love is a series of acts, some of which will be detrimental to me, but all of which will be beneficial to the one I love. Therefore, I see sacrifice as a positive proof of love. Without it, I am really only loving myself. I am only being selfish. Intellectually, though, I am tantalized by your

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Good idea, Joe... exploring that boundary... I'm getting lots of ideas... plot lines. The how part is always the challenge for me. I'm never short on the inspiration part. ...but I wonder whether anyone else will respond to the current challenge...Chris? Tonya? others?

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And nice thoughts at that, Don. I always enjoy looking at your blog... I enjoyed it. Nice thoughts indeed. Thanks Joe, Chris. In this poem, I was goin' for the spiritual in the everyday moment. Glad you liked it.

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NCI LINK "Penile cancer is rare in most developed nations, including the United States, where the rate is less than 1 per 100,000 men per year." - NCI I usually avoid medical "controversies" on JoeUser like the plague, but I had to respond in this instance. Thank you for an otherwise excellent and well-researched article, James. Appreciated it

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