As a first-time visitor of this thread to see what the post count is all about, what I have to say on immediate gut reaction is this:
I would have read this if the font weren't so incredibly overlarge. If it's quality, it doesn't need the emphasis.
Apologies, but I'm not a fan of being shouted at to gain my attention. That, plus some of the "teaser" statements at the end of the OP that indicate the next chapter will make me pretty much orgasm, make it difficult for me to minimize the response to the egotistical stylings and give it an honest critique. I feel like I'm being treated like a seven-year-old, and I really don't appreciate it.
Until that's corrected, a distinct NO for "publishing", whatever that means.
Dude, you are the only one that is complaining about the large font, really it just makes it easier to read, i mean i personally like the large font, and before you comment about the teasers or make opinions about publishing the story , read the story, and stop acting like a seven year old if you don't want to be treated like one
and guywhoyoudon'tno, i already voted for the publishing thing(it was a yes) so don't count me twice ( you could if you wanted to though...lol)