the first of my three revision checks for part 1 has been completed, which means I can now begin writing part 2! Expect chapter 10, part 1 sometime during the next week. I'll have to fit it in between my summer homework, so it'll still be a few days. But it's coming! Chapter 10, part 1 will introduce you to the Da'Mani'k (read chapter 9,3 over again if you don't recognize that word) and the lifestyle of the Mani'k. Should be pretty exciting.
now for some Sinners-as-a-novel updates. After I post this I am going to write a letter to Ironclad asking for future permission to publish this. If they say yes before I write 10,1, sorry, but you won't get it. If they say yes afterwards, I'll remove everything except for chapters 1-3 in preparation for serious novel-writing. Also sorry, but that's how it'll have to be. But if they don't say yes, then there's no problem! I'll continue to post for your guys' enjoyment.
Sinners is currently:
Referrals are as follows:
152 - google.com
28 - sinsofasolarempire.com
18 - yahoo.com
16 - tvtropes.com
10 - stardock
3 - impulsedriven.com
2 - bing.com
2 - feedburner.com
1 - demigodthegame.com (.....i dont see how that one works)
1 - eonpal.com
i'd also like to thank everyone who has commented on this thread. If you notice the new change to the forum title, it says Sinners has never been off the first page of the SOASE forum, and it's due to everyone on here who has commented. You kept this thread alive, and you kept my spirits interested in writing more. You helped me evaluate my work, refine and craft it, and sparked some real brainwaves for me. Without you all, literally, this story would never be. So, again, big thanks to everyone who's commenting and if you're not commenting COMMENT! Even if its just a 'hey i really like the last chapter all right cya.' It tells me that you're reading my story and enjoying it, and that inspires me to write more. so commenting=happiness=more writing=your enjoyment=commenting. Join the great Circle of Life! (just saw lion king again yesterday, i love that movie.)
EDIT: ok, the email to ironclad is out! lets see what they decide....
EDIT EDIT: all right, another thing i forgot to mention. my computer is having serious problems, and all of my programs except for jarte, internet explorer, and firefox do not work. So that means galaxyforge too, which means I don't know where any of the planets are. Which means I can't write new chapters, since, as I mentioned a while ago, all the galactic positions are the position they are in galaxyforge. I'm waiting on Toshiba to send me restore disks, but until then I cannot write more and they're being a bitch about it, so it could be a couple weeks. (apparently, the people who manage the disks only work from 8-5). So nothing new until my computer gets restored. Hang tight.