Wow, this one was really good. It's a lot grittier than your usual stuff. (if grittier is a word...?) Anyway, this is awesome.
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Pretty dang interesting, not gonna lie. Good job.
Wow, this is great, and it's really true. After all of the excitement of Christmas, January just seems to be there, not really for any reason other than to be wintery. I think we all are waiting for February, Valentine's Day, and the start of spring. Very well written.
How do you post pics on your site? I've recently been to Italy, but I don't know how to put pics on here.
well, ok. If you say so.
oh, thanks alex. This is amazingly beautiful. and it rhymed! well, at least it had a rhyming flair. Lovely.
oh btw, you dont have to put a grey sub title every time! Welcome to the cult. It will take over your life, and may lead to a hook up. Have fun! Amanda
yay nick! happiness to you and your first poem!
This is an amazing song, and very inspirational. I used it in a speech i made my sr. year of high school. It speaks to everyone who has ever had a close friendship or lost someone special.
Ok I have two 1.) Andrew Largeman: You know that point in your life when you realize that the house that you grew up in isn't really your home anymore? All of the sudden even though you have some place where you can put your shit that idea of home is gone. You'll see when you move out it just sort of happens one day one day and it's just gone. And you can never get it back. It's like you get homesick for a place that doesn't exist. I mea
I have that card at home somewhere! I went through a magic phase, and I'm pretty sure at one time i had one.
wow, i know this was ages ago, but i just read this and cracked up. I'm glad Dani wasn't in here, she'd be looking at me funny.
This was really good. It's very beautiful and well written.
This is pretty good. I think that you really said something here, and I can relate to this. Good job!
This is beautiful. Very fluid and i like that. Just plain well written.
Wow. I really like this, its got a really good meter to it. I liked the flow and readability. Nice.
Wow. Impressive. This is very clever and it really made me think about what was being written. I agree that we are becoming desensitized to the small and beautiful things of our world. I couldn't have put it better.
This gets better with every line you read. I especially enjoyed: Respectable young women, How great you have grown, How wonderful have you become, You have cast aside your fragility, And have acheived more than most. That is just great.
The first stanza is far superior. The rhyming makes the 2nd and 3rd stanza sort of cheesy, but the first few lines paint a wonderful picture. Over all, not bad, I enjoyed it.
Hey I just randomly found your poem and i really liked it. Sometimes nature shows, It shows what you feel, A visual of your hopelessness. that is exceptional.
This would make a sweet song. Dang, you must really love someone or your just a freaking hopeless romantic. Either way I love it.
Old-worldy? That is my new favourite word of the day!
Wow Al! You never cease to impress me.