Here is the first and second chapter. Enjoy and look forward to your oppionon, sorry it took so long. (Got to love the chaos of the holidays, huh!) ************************************************ Chapter One </
[quote]Still, even if a large part of your story has to change, I just don't think any capable captain would pass on a video recording of a famous capital ship's last moments to the first man he laid eyes on.[/quote]I apreciate your criticism and it will help me a lot. However, while I unerstand what you were going for with that, I did that becuase Vice Admiral Froelar didn't think there was anything too sensitive about the recordings and gave the petty officer the job of doing it because it
Alright, thanks! I'll look at yours too! I hope you like my story, I'm sure i'll like yours too! See ya!
Hey, I decided to copy my post in fan submissions here and see if more, (more like anyone for that matter), people look at the story I'm writting that is set in the Sins of a Solar Empire universe. Hope you guys like it. Hell, maybe it will get published one day! Anyway here it is below; its what I have wrote so far and I will keep ading to it. ******************************************************************** Prolouge &n
I have put up the prolouge to my story now. Enjoy! It is also under the fan submission page. Its called SOASE Story-Prolouge (Subtitle)- Vasari Breakthrough. Hope you guys like it! Victory for the T.E.C!
I got bored one day and decided to start writing a story about one of my favorite RTSs. It is called Vasari Breakthrough and here is the Prolouge to the story, if you guys like it I'll keep going. Hell, maybe it will get published one day! Anyway here it is below. *********************************************** &nbs
