Ackerman74

One of my biggest gripes was not being able to build a larger fleet than I did in SoaSE and won't have a chance to test this out for some time so can you in this version?

Can a link to the full book as it exist now be posted?

interesting read

Very very good. You catch the bullshit expectations that every member of the military (myself among them) expect because of people second guessing. Doesn't matter how good you are, you will always second guess.

Very good writing. and very good military writing and description. Much better than most ME fanfic

A larger fleet cap would be amazing to have. Especially as the TEC because of their large economic base.

I imagine that when the sequel is published a great deal moe lore will be published.

Witchfire, please let us know if you're continuing! the wonder is killing us all!

Good man. keep it coming

Advent were on the eastern reaches though, not the northwest. Says so in the opening cinematic to it

Not bad. Good narration and description

Pretty good overall. Also, do you have a link to the complete story?

^^^Unfortunately for the advent, the TEC has a lot of butter.

I guess everyone has a Napoleonic Syndrome [e digicons]:grin:[/e]

Man, you just need to turn this into a full-fledged game instead of a mod. I know would buy it

^^^wheres the forum on here for it?

pretty good man, keep it up

damn man, you must be one hell of a modder

Its been very good so far, you just need some more character development (i.e. Archie Kol), as well as how the Vasari, TEC, and Advent societies work as a whole. With a few minor additions and the editing, it will become a very good story.

[quote who="The Undying" reply="20" id="2253094"] go to halopedia and you cant get the entire series plot He's one o' dem deceptivinators! Get 'im! *Evil death squad spontaneously appears* No, I wouldn't really, rather point out this deceptive mistake. The Undying. [/quote] Oops, i was typing fast and didnt notice, thanks lol

^^^go to halopedia and you can get the entire series plot

Bombers are good against everyting except fighters. If you use them right, you can destroy a entire cap ship in a single pass with a large enough group (around 50 squadrons)

Dont criticize it if u havent read it.

GET PUBLISHED MAN!!!

What are space ponies? ive found everything else but them